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There is a place i like to go
To be alone, to feel free to howl
Without the fear of eyes in my neck
to feel their gaze to smell their breath

A soul filled with rage can be set free
to wreack havoc all around
from the moment the sun rises until it goes down

Hell lives within my soul and within my mind
I feel it sear and burn and cut away
Like its the end of me, that i will never see another day

I wish for someone else to feel the same
Its odd i know the reason is clear
It is so lonesome to be like this
The pain of that beats all the rest

i wish for someone else to know it
so that they can understand
that even if they feel like that
They can come to me and i will understand

I won't let them be alone, cause i know the pain
but together we stand strong
and the eyes on our backs will fade away
it will be strange and scary, it will be overwhelming too
but this time it wont just be me or you

It will be both of us
learning to know one another
to feel another
and one another to trust
©2008-2009 ~malcite
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Author's Comments

I got inspired after watching the latest filler of naruto: Shippuuden (ep 070) For more info i recommend either looking up Naruto on Wiki or maybe even better watch a few episodes.

I have been an outsider since i started into this world. For years i was a bully target simply cause i had a different view on most things and because i had hearing aids which people simply didn't understand and rather than trying to understand it they shunned it to keep it easy.
This didn't stop until i started high school and due to all the shunning i endured i still feel like i have eyes staring at my back. Sure it is mostly false alarm but its an emotional scar i have that i really hate.
I also don't have many closer friends, but i am getting there slowly but surely. Most people just need to get the time to know me and they see that i am not just a weirdo, but a weirdo whos fun to be around, and a smart one at that.
I live by the motto that any knowledge no matter how useless is worth absorbing.
Myself i hate gardening, but yet i work at a florist and have learned alot from it. You never know what someone might ask you to tell them later in life or where your own imagination can draw upon your infinite knowledge to create the most fantastic things.

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~justynbirds Nov 5, 2008, 12:37:32 AM
HAHA! -leans back in his chair and claps his hands loudly-

amazing, we DO think the same, its too bad you live in... -checks profile- Norway

0.o

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~malcite Nov 5, 2008, 1:39:25 AM
thats not a bad thing, its only bad that so few think like we do, its a good thing we live apart so we can reach more people on a global level ;)

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~justynbirds Nov 5, 2008, 4:49:18 PM
well, thats both true and untrue, we COULD reach more people that way, yes, the only problem is that people dont listen to anything unless theres a large number gathered for the cause, even than only a small few people help, and even fewer of those who help actualy stick to it, I have given up on trying to get others to see the truth and simply started liveing for my own, thats the one difference between us that I can see so far. but reguardless, send me your email in a noat so we can talk off of a public website

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There is a fine line between genius and insanity, I have taken that line and replaced it with a fish.

-Currently a member of *Pokedex
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